Homework Answers p70-71: Writing

Answers:

B is the clearer answer because it is better organised and contains more exemplification to support the argument (though not all points are equally well-exemplified - as exercise 3 reveals). The writer of B disagrees with the statement and states his/her opinion unambiguosly in the opening paragraph, then goes on to exemplify each aspect in a new paragraph and finally includes a clear conclusion.

A, on the other hand, is rambling and contradictory, its paragraphs are disorganised, there is no introduction and the final sentence is unclear. Interestingly, as exercise 3 reveals, it has more points than B, but these are rarely developed or exemplified (apart from the information given on Bilbao).

3 Suggested answers
live entertainment A - yes 2 B - yes 3
open spaces A - yes 1 B - no
transport A - yes 3 B - yes 3
cultural benefits A - yes 1 B - yes 2
noise/crowds A- yes 1 B - no
shoppping A - yes 1 B - yes 3
architecture A- no B - yes 2

4 Additions to table

Introducing....in terms of
Adding another related point...Another (obvious benefit); What is more
Contrasting previous information....At the same time; However
Clarifying what has been said....In other words
Linking to the argument ....because of this; Thus
Concluding/summarising....In short

5 Answers
city living: urban living, lifestyle
21st century: contemporary, modern, nowadays
stressful: oppressive
offers: provides, support
advantages: benefits, oppportunities


EXTRA HOMEWORK:
6 This is the same task as in exercise 1. Answer B should be used for guidance. Please give your writing to Nicole at her desk in the teacher's room or email your answer to nicolestoupe@hotmail.com